Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Wacky Wednesday!!


We have had a busy week. Yesterday we wrote narratives with a partner.


We used a photo from the Australian Outback to help us with ideas.



We think a great narrative should have a:




  • super starter


  • problem


  • solution


  • juicy words


  • great ending


  • time words


  • be written in the past tense


These are great and Miss B has published them. Check out this one by Riley and Jacob.




One day we were hunting for a rabbit. We hunted it. We had to go through bushes. Finally we shot the gun. We got the rabbit. We took it back to the truck. We got home and had it for tea. It was rabbit stew, it was a big stew. After that we were fat.
Jacob and Riley












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